Thursday, May 13, 2010

just not my fairytale

AWARDS BY KARAN A ,THOUSIF AND JINGLE here ...thnx guys ... !
..thnx :)

just not my fairytale

All this while i was with you
i know you were not true
and the n we both through
because the relation we had it failed
but in my heart i knew it wasn't my fairytale
because when i was in the dark
it lost its spark
and it was the time to see
how strong it was
and came to know it was weakest of all
because it withered away with a blow of wind
and i came to know it was a mistake
it was just not my fairytale



Jingle said...

your passion for your grandfather really shows,
wonderful word play on others.
incredible job!

artswebshow said...

This is some really beautiful poetry.
Great job

Anonymous said...

beautiful touching poetry..i can feel your emotions with the woven words you have..great poem! keep it up! ;)

kkrige said...

So sad when we have to admit the death of a relationship. Touching. Visiting from Jingle's Poet's rally.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Some relationships are very brittle that a gentle breeze can shred it into pieces. The pain is unbearable too. Nicely written.

anthonynorth said...

Relationships can be so hard going. A soulful poem. Nicely done.

Arpit Rastogi said...

Nice work done..
beautiful.. :)

viddhi said...

@ jingle ..thnx alot .. !

@ artswebshow..thnx ..... hope to see again here on my blog .. !

@ hopepoh ...thnx alot .. ! :)
hope to see again here on my blog .. !
@ kkrige..thnx alot .. !

viddhi said...

@ Vittaldas Prabhu ..thnx alot .. !
thnx fr your visit.. !

@ anthonynorth ... thnx alot .. ! hope to see u again

@ Arpit .. thnx ! :)

Anonymous said...

somehow this reminded me of a song called "wild horses"
i think by taylor swift..
ekdum mast madamjee

you can check my poem at

viddhi said...

thnx..meghu .... ur awesome .. !

Jingle said...

Please feel free to nominate fellow poets for April Celebrate Poetry award.
Many thanks!

Ankit said...

awesum is the word !!!!

I liked the title too !!!

'It was just not my fairytale'

something we need to understand,
relations are not fairytale !!

touched by it !!

Happy blogging,

tk cr !!

viddhi said...

@jingle...i'll do that fr sure..

@ ankit bhiya .. thanx alot.... ! thnx .. ! :)

Ediomo said...

ThAnks for always viewing my works. I'm like hell very delighted..


viddhi said...

@ Ediomo ...ur welcum .. !

Achyut Telang said...

Loved it!

Short Poems said...

Beautiful touching and creative poetry!

viddhi said...

@ Achyut ..thnx alot .. !

@ Short Poems ..thnx .. !

karan a said...

Wonderful poem!

An award is waiting for you at my blog! Congratulations!

Jingle said...

another poetry award 4 u.
have a beautiful day!
I appreciate your uplifting comments and handsome spirits.

viddhi said...

thnx ji .. u r too generous .. ! :)

Jingle said...

have fun!

Just Lisa said...

Beautiful poetry. Great Imagery.

I came by to welcome you to SITS! We're happy to have you with us!

Shell said...

Very powerful!

Stopping by to welcome you to SITS!

penelope said...

nyc .. love your beautiful'l place you have in here... lovely ...

the poetry is powerful ...

a new follower has been added to your list .. :)

Sadia said...

lovely..keep up the good work.. :)

Thousif Raza said...

nice one... simple yet powerful.... nice :)

take care and keep writing.........

viddhi said...

@ penny, ... thnkii .. ! :)

@ sadia ...thnx alot .. u too have a wonderful blog .. ! :)

@ thousif ... thnx alot :) !