Monday, June 14, 2010

THE ENDLESS WAIT...

THE ENDLESS WAIT...

Dark wintry night
too foggy outside
still she went
to the river bank....

Every night she awaits
his return...
or just a piece of word from him....
at very same place where he left her..
with promises of his return
she waits , she waits till the midnight..
till the time her lamps burn out
till the time her hopes die..
and then she goes back
with her heart full of pain
she stays up all night
remembering the old times
sitting in an empty room
where only her
longing to feel love lurks
loved by him ...
sometimes she cries
all the time she hides
her feelings and her true desires
she smiles through her pain
she smiles through her tears
she smiles and she laughs
as if nothing's wrong
all day long
for the one's she loves
and for the one's who love her
and as the night approaches
she revives her hope and
rekindle the fire...
and gathers all her
courage and strength
to go to the bank again
and go through the same old pain

Sometimes he sends a letter
some love wrapped in it
but somehow a strange pain
she feels ...
in the words of the letter sent
not her own
but of the one she loves
she tries to find
tries to search the reasons
of this never ending pain
but the search is always futile
because he is far far away ..thousands of mile..
sometimes all she wants to do is hold him tight
take all the pain away
sometimes she feels she lacks somewhere
and she feels he completes her
and for now and forever
all she wants is his happiness....


...........VIDDHI ARORA

11 comments:

Thousif Raza said...

Viddhi... the poems is good as always, still needs that spark... a lil spark is missing... there has to be that dash of pain, it should stab you, i dint feel it here.... maybe becasue i'm in a crappy mood ;)... nice attempt though :)

take care and keep writing.......

Ankit said...

Nice !!!
but u r capable of more !!!

Itz cool !!!!
Itz Gud but its not the best !!!
hope u'll make it in the next one and won't take this wrongly !!!

nyways Happy blogging and tk cr !!!

P.S. Dnt worry this one is Excellent too !!!
waiting for next post !!!

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viddhi said...

thousif and and ankit bhaiya.....


i know this is not the best ...this actually not upto the mark .. long ago i wrote it ....it sort of lacks a feelings wala touch ....

i'll try and write something better..nest time :) !

Arpit Rastogi said...

so long...
job is keeping me a bit busy!!!

but um back.. n your poem is as AWESOME as always.. :)
har baar senti kar deti hai yar tu.. :|

You rock gal.. :)

Keep Writing.. :)
Keep Smiling.. :)

Jingle said...

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pick anything you like,
enjoy!
Cheers!

viddhi said...

@arpit....thank you :)

@ jingle .... thanx . ! :)

kavisionz said...

A lovely post!
Speaking of longing, of doubts, of pain, of hope... of everything that comes in the package called "love"
A beautiful read!

By the way, I absolutely loved the piece you have written, as a tribute to your dear grandfather! Extremely moving, it reminded me of my grandmom, and a poem I had written a coupla months back for her...


Keep writing, girl...
And have a bright and wonderful week ahead!

viddhi said...

@ kavisionz...thnx for dropiing thanx for liking wat i write .. !

hope to see more of you on my blog . ! :)