Thursday, April 29, 2010

so much like love.....

(for the thursaday poets rally.....)

so much like love.....

I cannot leave you

Because I don’t hold the

Best of you …..

I cannot take you

Because I don’t take the

Rest of you …….

But somewhere I know

In some parts of my heart

We are one

But somewhere am

Scared too …..

I might have

Misread your mind …

May be your not

All mine …

I peered so into everything

That was yours ……

To search you out

Who are you..

In your heart….

You seem so good

too good to be true

and I believe you ..

and this Is what

scares me the most

when I think about you

I get lost …

And I cannot sleep …

I wish you could peep

Inside my heart

But it’s an art ..

And I don’t know whether

You are skilled or not …

This feeling is strange

But so much like love it is ...

I don’t know what you feel

How you feel …..

Sometimes I wonder

Would you be there..

Till the very end???

The question lingers in my mind ..

Day and night ..

Whose answer am not able to find..!!


.......VIDDHI ARORA

33 comments:

Jingle said...

my goodness,
you are very creative!

viddhi said...

thanks .. ! :)

Wordwand said...

lovely poetry and smart blog viddhi.well done.happy to come acorss your blog after you left a comment in my blog, so thanks a lot ; keep in touch.

viddhi said...

yeah sure thanks alot ... !

anthonynorth said...

Beautiful, emotional words.

viddhi said...

thnx thanx alot .. !

Brian Miller said...

dropping by on the rally...
wonderful verses...the one about your grandfather especially hit the mark for me...thank you.

Arpit Rastogi said...

Good to know that u finally participated in a rally.. :))

@ Poem :: *claps*

You deserve it... :)

God bless you...

Thousif Raza said...

hey nice work ya... you know viddhi you can be a great song writer ya... you have got great potential... nice words liked it :)


take care and keep writing.........

Ankit said...

Beautiful,
Awesum,
Excellent .............
I cnt express more,
even the words above are an understatement for this work of urs !!!
keep going !!!
Its simply Mind Blowing, We can feel the words !!!!!

bryliejane said...

You are an exceptional poet. These words are beautiful and amazing. I felt each and every line. Thank you, I'm so glad I came across your blog xx

oinky said...

beautiful poems.. i like it ;) keep it up!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

what a beautiful tribute to your grandfather!
well done!
Happy Thursday!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira

viddhi said...
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viddhi said...

@ brian ...thanx brian... !!

@Arpit ....thnx ...thnx alot .. ! finally i did participate in the rally..!

@Thousif....thnx thnx alot....song writer...thats tough job ...neways thnx alot .. !

@Ankit bhaiya..... thnx thnx alot ... u words are indeed encouraging....thnx alot.. !


@bryliejane.....thnx thnx alot ...hope to see more of you on my blog .. !

@oinky ...thnx ..alot ..!

@ shakira...thanx... !

megzone said...

oh my
viddhi that was tooo gooooddd yaar...
now im glad i suggested you to take part :)
gal you're starting to give me complex
heehehehehe :)
it was such a heart felt poem..
bas ek dhun chahiye.. mast gaana banega :D
ROCK ON GAL :)

Jingle said...

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/04/awards-are-given-to-jingle-by-kathy.html

thank you for the uplifting spirits!

♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ said...

wooow
awesome!
loved it ^_^
would like to see more from you :))

viddhi said...

@ meghana....thnx ..u'r way better than me .. in no way m competition fr u .. :)

@♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ thnx ....thnx alot .. even i would like to see more of u here.. !

Wordwand said...

I've got awards for you here : http://myawardscorner.blogspot.com/

karan a said...

I really liked your way of expression through poetry! Read 5-6 of them, simple amazing!
liked "birth of a bright day"
"My world" and "for a special friend..." particularly!

Keep going!

Thnx for visting my blog. Hope to see you more!

viddhi said...

@ karan .. hey thnx for liking my poems... &thnx for the visit. ..

viddhi said...

@ Wordwand..thnx fr the awards... !

Jingle said...

Happy May!

Ediomo said...

A very gud writer you are, You definitely miss your grandpa....keep up.

Read this and fetch volumes of inspirations:
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/04/gratitude-amidst-agony.html

viddhi said...

@ Ediomo ....thnx ..thnx alot .. hope to see more of u here on my blog .. ! :)

suryagni said...

simply fantastic. wonderful. hope you both see and like each other :)

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/09/sunday-special-awards-for-remarkable-memes-and-participants/

Meme participation awards,
Sorry for being late.
It takes me days to have everyone notified!

Reply

viddhi said...

@ suryagni .... thnx .. ! :)

@ jingle ..thnx alot .. !

Anonymous said...

excellent poetry.

Anonymous said...

keep it up viddhi-


dinkardas

mayank said...

its very awsum.... you have a wonderful imagination....

viddhi said...

thank you...