(for the thursaday poets rally.....)
so much like love.....
I cannot leave you
Because I don’t hold the
Best of you …..
I cannot take you
Because I don’t take the
Rest of you …….
But somewhere I know
In some parts of my heart
We are one
But somewhere am
Scared too …..
I might have
Misread your mind …
May be your not
All mine …
I peered so into everything
That was yours ……
To search you out
Who are you..
In your heart….
You seem so good
too good to be true
and I believe you ..
and this Is what
scares me the most
when I think about you
I get lost …
And I cannot sleep …
I wish you could peep
Inside my heart
But it’s an art ..
And I don’t know whether
You are skilled or not …
This feeling is strange
But
I don’t know what you feel
How you feel …..
Sometimes I wonder
Would you be there..
Till the very end???
The question lingers in my mind ..
Day and night ..
Whose answer am not able to find..!!
.......VIDDHI ARORA
33 comments:
my goodness,
you are very creative!
thanks .. ! :)
lovely poetry and smart blog viddhi.well done.happy to come acorss your blog after you left a comment in my blog, so thanks a lot ; keep in touch.
yeah sure thanks alot ... !
Beautiful, emotional words.
thnx thanx alot .. !
dropping by on the rally...
wonderful verses...the one about your grandfather especially hit the mark for me...thank you.
Good to know that u finally participated in a rally.. :))
@ Poem :: *claps*
You deserve it... :)
God bless you...
hey nice work ya... you know viddhi you can be a great song writer ya... you have got great potential... nice words liked it :)
take care and keep writing.........
Beautiful,
Awesum,
Excellent .............
I cnt express more,
even the words above are an understatement for this work of urs !!!
keep going !!!
Its simply Mind Blowing, We can feel the words !!!!!
You are an exceptional poet. These words are beautiful and amazing. I felt each and every line. Thank you, I'm so glad I came across your blog xx
beautiful poems.. i like it ;) keep it up!
what a beautiful tribute to your grandfather!
well done!
Happy Thursday!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira
@ brian ...thanx brian... !!
@Arpit ....thnx ...thnx alot .. ! finally i did participate in the rally..!
@Thousif....thnx thnx alot....song writer...thats tough job ...neways thnx alot .. !
@Ankit bhaiya..... thnx thnx alot ... u words are indeed encouraging....thnx alot.. !
@bryliejane.....thnx thnx alot ...hope to see more of you on my blog .. !
@oinky ...thnx ..alot ..!
@ shakira...thanx... !
oh my
viddhi that was tooo gooooddd yaar...
now im glad i suggested you to take part :)
gal you're starting to give me complex
heehehehehe :)
it was such a heart felt poem..
bas ek dhun chahiye.. mast gaana banega :D
ROCK ON GAL :)
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/04/awards-are-given-to-jingle-by-kathy.html
thank you for the uplifting spirits!
wooow
awesome!
loved it ^_^
would like to see more from you :))
@ meghana....thnx ..u'r way better than me .. in no way m competition fr u .. :)
@♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ thnx ....thnx alot .. even i would like to see more of u here.. !
I've got awards for you here : http://myawardscorner.blogspot.com/
I really liked your way of expression through poetry! Read 5-6 of them, simple amazing!
liked "birth of a bright day"
"My world" and "for a special friend..." particularly!
Keep going!
Thnx for visting my blog. Hope to see you more!
@ karan .. hey thnx for liking my poems... &thnx for the visit. ..
@ Wordwand..thnx fr the awards... !
Happy May!
A very gud writer you are, You definitely miss your grandpa....keep up.
Read this and fetch volumes of inspirations:
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/04/gratitude-amidst-agony.html
@ Ediomo ....thnx ..thnx alot .. hope to see more of u here on my blog .. ! :)
simply fantastic. wonderful. hope you both see and like each other :)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/09/sunday-special-awards-for-remarkable-memes-and-participants/
Meme participation awards,
Sorry for being late.
It takes me days to have everyone notified!
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@ suryagni .... thnx .. ! :)
@ jingle ..thnx alot .. !
excellent poetry.
keep it up viddhi-
dinkardas
its very awsum.... you have a wonderful imagination....
thank you...
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