Sunday, April 4, 2010

birth of a bright day

I stay awake all night ,
and admire the beautiful moonlight.


The moon, it looks like a dream ,
just above the translucent blue stream .


companion of lonely hearts,
and a handful of stars.


The vast expanse of deep core blue,
awaits the spread of sun's red and golden hue .


and then just above the horizon sun rose,
with all the new hopes ,
with all the positivity and nothing to loath...


This is my beautiful morn ,
and this is how my bright day is born.

..............VIDDHI ARORA


19 comments:

Arpit Rastogi said...

Well, Good morning... :P

Nice Poem... :)

Keep Writing.. Keep Smiling.. :)

vidhzii said...

good eve....i should say as it is evening now.....
thnks thnks .... thanks for liking the poem .... :) !!

Arpit Rastogi said...

arrey.. that good morning was for your poem... :D

vidhzii said...

ahhh!!......yeah yeah ... :p ....m not so good with these things ....hehe ..humour is entirely ur forte

megzone said...

superbbb... really beautiful...
you have a knack of weaving words so beautifully...

hey Vidhi i have read quite a number of your poems.. and i must say you write really well...
if you are interested.. every thursday we have a poets rally that happens at a person's blog - Jingle's blog.. anyone can participate..
if you are interested you can check out the previous week's rally to get a feel at
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/thursday-poets-rally-week-121-april-8-14-2010/

you can keep a lookout on her blog... as to when she announces the next and just leave a comment sayin you would like to participate..
Im sayin this cos you really write well :)
take care
Rock ON...!!

Thousif Raza said...

your writing is truthful and i like it a lot... and the words you have written at the top, abt your grand pa... really nice :)

and thx for coming to my blog... hope to see you more of you there :)...




take care and keep writing......

viddhi said...

@ meghhna ...thnx thnx alot ... :) :) ..n yeah m definately participating in the next week's rally....thnx thnx alot for the link thnx fr liking my poems ... :)


@ thousif .....thnx thnx alot fr liking my peoms .. !!

Lincoln said...

its beautiful :)

viddhi said...

thnkii!!!

Siddhant said...

hey nice one yaar ,keep on writing alots of poems n then publish the book

viddhi said...

thnx siddhant

Lakshya said...

Awesome!

Just that one word!

Lakshya said...

You should now start righting a book!

viddhi said...

thnx lakshya....thnx alot .. ! :)
surely i will start "writing" a book...

Ankit said...

Excellent for sure !!!

I agree with the person above,
u shud write a book,
actually U shud have written by now,
Ur collection is also mind blowing !!!!

So do it !!!

Happy blogging !!!
Take care !!

viddhi said...

@ ankit bhaiya.....i cannot publish a buk with the collection here..but i'll surely start writing a book .. !

Heartspell said...

Nice awakening...Heartspell

island of peace said...

A masterpiece. truly beautiful and dreamy poem.

happy thursday and namaste,
trisha (mydomainpvt.wordpress.com)

viddhi said...

@ Heartspell ..thnx alot .. !

@ island of peace ...thnx alot .. ! n namaste :P .. !