Thursday, June 16, 2011

She moves about
in the thorny wilderness
she is running away
the path is long
almost never ending.
Thorns is what that passed her
Thorns are what that are laid in her way
Bruised bleeding she still runs
her voice echoes wildly
dismissed as a fit of delirium
by the flowers and the floss
the dark little nymphs
the soul of the sky ..
by soul of the era gone by
they sleep unperturbed
the truth only she tries to see
through the misty eyes
her vision is not clear
but her aims are
direction is lost
but not her determination
some say she will make it....
some say she won't
she never says a word..
only gazes at the peak
where she has to reach
but when she sees the height
the steep slopes
she gets scared
of falling , of failing
failing is not
the only scary thought
but fear of failure
scares too...



Arpit Rastogi said...

Kya e baat hai.. :)

Just amazing.. :)

Dhansu!! :)

Write more!! You do great with your thoughts.. :)

Tk Cr Dost.. :)

£arthieeee...... said...


phatichar said...

Love the last two lines :)

Wonderful blog here..will come back for more.. :)

Anonymous said...

Awesome description of a lonely solitare.......loved the last few lines

viddhi said...

@ Arpit :: *BOWS*

thanks alot !

i shall try to write more and better.

you too take care ! :-)

thanks for the wonderful comment... :-)

viddhi said...

@£arthieeee :: thanks alot :-)

thanks for dropping.

hope to see you again !

viddhi said...

@ phatichar :: thanks for liking .

i would love to see you again :-)

thanks for dropping by !

viddhi said...

@ Anonymous :: thanks ..but you should have written your name atleast..:-)

thanks for dropping :-)

Ankit said...

okay so Viddhi is back !!!
Awesum !!
Jhakassssssss !!!

mazaa aa gaya !!!
Loved it so much that read it 4 times !!

This one is my favourite, feel like learning it !!!

No words to describe,
such an inspiring one for me !!

Happy Blogging and take care !!!

Jack said...


Feelings in the mind of a person trying to achieve goal against all odds brought out so well. It is a pleasure to read this.

Take care

Rachit said...

lovely, :)

viddhi said...

@jack :- thanks.
glad that you liked it :-)

viddhi said...

@rachit :: thanks alot !:-)

SF-1 said...

Lovely poem... As I said earlier, I seem to be interested in poetry too these days.. Thanks to you!!!!

I think she has to become fearless.... I posted this in one of my old posts.. No no... Not doing any publicity or anything like that but i think it suits best in the comments section of this post...

I read this quote by Taylor Swift  - To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearles is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death. Fearless is falling madly in love again, even though you've been hurt before.

I know she is strong and she will get what she desires in lyf.