Sunday, December 5, 2010

Through the broken panes she tries to see
she has reasons
and knows what it means to be free
for her thats the only way to be

dreams lead her life
some reality too
her brain and heart torn by a strife
to strike a balance for her is a drive

sometimes she thinks she should let go
but then she asks why ?
its her choice not to go with the flow
not her business to think if it gives people a blow !

9 comments:

Sumit Sarkar said...

Beautiful poem Viddhi...
I love it :)

viddhi said...

thanx ..:)

Thousif Raza said...

i got the meaning... but i have a lil doubt when you said at first that she loves to be free, and in the end where she has to make a choice.. but isin't it binding her down... like holding her back... where;s the freedom there?

just asking... i loved couple of lines.... :) cool lines :)

take care and keep writing...........

viddhi said...

@ thousif :: well thats the thing no ? we all think we are free....we believe we are.. but in the real sense we never are.... no one is ..something or the other binds us...

she makes a choice .. she thinks she's free when she makes a choice because its hers. but later she realizes she did compromised on somethings...

Ankit said...

awesum as always !!!
I got the meaning,
well i think so !!
will read it again sometime to get it right !!!

happy blogging & take care !!!

viddhi said...

@ ankit bhaiya. :: thanx.

WINDOWLAD said...

May you have more love, peace and light in this time of the year my friend.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!^^

P.S. I have left something for you. Please click here.

GOD Bless!^^

~Kelvin

viddhi said...

meryy Christmas to you to ! :)
thanx !

SF-1 said...

She is free of any pressure to let go or to hang on. She can decide what to do with her lyf. She is in total control of her lyf. She knows how to strike the balance or how to not balance at all.