Believe
Dark and light
two phases of life
none of them lasts forever
they come and go
dawn full of hopes
a dreamers delight
but dusk is just a lonely sight
The last rays of sun gives way
to darkness of the night
hearts may break
dreams may shatter
in sleepless eyes
but in the end its a part of life
it goes on
be strong be careful
its a long journey , a long way
some thorns you may not see
some devils in disguise
you may not recognize
pain of your heart -always hide
for everyone has to fight their own fight
night is not the time
to find lost the lost meanings ..
for darkness lets
no one find its way easily
give someone some love
rest they suck out on their own
cold and empty
feeling in heart
and some efforts
to build yourself again
suddenly that past comes in your way
to scare ..belittle you
try and believe in yourself
try to embrace that first ray of sunlight
the ray of hope
initially it will hurt
but don't be scared
just believe
that you can stand again
don't stop ..just believe
for its just a passing phase
and sooner or later it will pass.
..VIDDHI ARORA
p.s :- my last post was my 50th post .....so YEY ! congratulate me :P
15 comments:
viddhi,
Thankyou for your sweet appreciations on my blog,i'm glad you enjoyed the writings!
And i'm even more glader to find yours!
i love poets and i will look into all your posts to discover more of your works!
See ya soon!
Correct my dear !!
whatever you said i fully agree with you !!!
and for me this was one of your best ones !!!
Loved it !!
Simple yet awesum !!!
no words more to describe but yes this one is worth reading again and again !!
and i too think you must also think about publishing your masterpieces !!
Keep Writing !!
Happy Blogging and take care !!
So true yar...
Very well written..
I enjoyed every bit of your poem.. :) It was awesome.. :)
TIME is the biggest player in one's life..
& the point is you have to move along with time..
suddenly that past comes in your way
to scare ..belittle you
try and believe in yourself
try to embrace that first ray of sunlight
the ray of hope
initially it will hurt
but don't be scared
just believe
that you can stand again
don't stop ..just believe
are the lines i liked the most.. :)
& yippeee.. you completed your half century.. CONGRATULATIONS!!
I wish that you complete your century soon.. :)
Keep Writing. Keep Smiling.
the ray of hope
initially it will hurt
but don't be scared
just believe
nice composition...
and congo!!
Craftsman of light :: thanks alot ..hope to see you again ! :)
Ankit bhaiya :: hehe....thanks...you are too generous with your praises..thanks alot !
arpit :: thanks alot ! :) and true time is the biggest player.. true .. !
paramveer :: thanks alot :) and welcome to my blog ! :)
for everyone has to fight their own fight
night is not the time
to find lost the lost meanings ..
for darkness lets
no one find its way easily.
These lines really touched a chord with my thoughts, well written.keep posting
50th post?
wow, amazing milestone.
lovely poem.
Greetings, how are you?
Your absence is missed, hope you well…
Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!
Hope to see you in,
Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.
Cheers.
xoxox
@ prithvi :: thanks alot ! :)
@ jingle thanks alot ! :)
this time i will participate for sure.. :)
Hi Viddhi,
..wow... this poem is excellent... i love the feeling that comes from it... very positive and uplifting... this lines blown me away in cheers:
"try and believe in yourself
try to embrace that first ray of sunlight
the ray of hope
initially it will hurt
but don't be scared
just believe"
...really awesome my friend... and congrats for the 50th post.... have a great Sunday!!!^^
Cheers!!!^^
~Kelvin
thanks kelvin :)
beautiful poem !! viddhi .... keep writing ..
Yes black and white .. not everything can be put in black and white. But a lot of things can be.
The second episode of LOST, Locke explains about black and white pieces used in backgammon. Oh I miss LOST !!!
This was a nice post.. specifically written in white or just a co-incidence?
I forgot.. Congratulationssssssssssss!!!! 50 in less than 4 years... :-)
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