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just not my fairytale
All this while i was with you
i know you were not true
and the n we both through
because the relation we had it failed
but in my heart i knew it wasn't my fairytale
because when i was in the dark
it lost its spark
and it was the time to see
how strong it was
and came to know it was weakest of all
because it withered away with a blow of wind
and i came to know it was a mistake
it was just not my fairytale
.....VIDDHI ARORA
28 comments:
your passion for your grandfather really shows,
wonderful word play on others.
incredible job!
This is some really beautiful poetry.
Great job
beautiful touching poetry..i can feel your emotions with the woven words you have..great poem! keep it up! ;)
So sad when we have to admit the death of a relationship. Touching. Visiting from Jingle's Poet's rally.
Some relationships are very brittle that a gentle breeze can shred it into pieces. The pain is unbearable too. Nicely written.
Relationships can be so hard going. A soulful poem. Nicely done.
Nice work done..
beautiful.. :)
@ jingle ..thnx alot .. !
@ artswebshow..thnx ..... hope to see again here on my blog .. !
@ hopepoh ...thnx alot .. ! :)
hope to see again here on my blog .. !
@ kkrige..thnx alot .. !
@ Vittaldas Prabhu ..thnx alot .. !
thnx fr your visit.. !
@ anthonynorth ... thnx alot .. ! hope to see u again
@ Arpit .. thnx ! :)
aawww...awesome...
somehow this reminded me of a song called "wild horses"
i think by taylor swift..
ekdum mast madamjee
you can check my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/thursday-poets-rally-vers-beaucoup-astrology/
thnx..meghu .... ur awesome .. !
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Please feel free to nominate fellow poets for April Celebrate Poetry award.
Many thanks!
awesum is the word !!!!
I liked the title too !!!
'It was just not my fairytale'
something we need to understand,
relations are not fairytale !!
touched by it !!
Happy blogging,
tk cr !!
@jingle...i'll do that fr sure..
@ ankit bhiya .. thanx alot.... ! thnx .. ! :)
ThAnks for always viewing my works. I'm like hell very delighted..
Check this out: THE CELEBRATE POET OF APRIL AWARD.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-for-nomination/
@ Ediomo ...ur welcum .. !
Loved it!
Beautiful touching and creative poetry!
@ Achyut ..thnx alot .. !
@ Short Poems ..thnx .. !
Wonderful poem!
An award is waiting for you at my blog! Congratulations!
thnx ji .. u r too generous .. ! :)
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/24/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-and-more/
awards.
have fun!
Beautiful poetry. Great Imagery.
I came by to welcome you to SITS! We're happy to have you with us!
Very powerful!
Stopping by to welcome you to SITS!
nyc .. love your ..blog beautiful ..li'l place you have in here... lovely ...
the poetry is powerful ...
a new follower has been added to your list .. :)
lovely..keep up the good work.. :)
nice one... simple yet powerful.... nice :)
take care and keep writing.........
@ penny, ... thnkii .. ! :)
@ sadia ...thnx alot .. u too have a wonderful blog .. ! :)
@ thousif ... thnx alot :) !
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