I stay awake all night ,
and admire the beautiful moonlight.
The moon, it looks like a dream ,
just above the translucent blue stream .
companion of lonely hearts,
and a handful of stars.
The vast expanse of deep core blue,
awaits the spread of sun's red and golden hue .
and then just above the horizon sun rose,
with all the new hopes ,
with all the positivity and nothing to loath...
This is my beautiful morn ,
and this is how my bright day is born.
..............VIDDHI ARORA
19 comments:
Well, Good morning... :P
Nice Poem... :)
Keep Writing.. Keep Smiling.. :)
good eve....i should say as it is evening now.....
thnks thnks .... thanks for liking the poem .... :) !!
arrey.. that good morning was for your poem... :D
ahhh!!......yeah yeah ... :p ....m not so good with these things ....hehe ..humour is entirely ur forte
superbbb... really beautiful...
you have a knack of weaving words so beautifully...
hey Vidhi i have read quite a number of your poems.. and i must say you write really well...
if you are interested.. every thursday we have a poets rally that happens at a person's blog - Jingle's blog.. anyone can participate..
if you are interested you can check out the previous week's rally to get a feel at
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/thursday-poets-rally-week-121-april-8-14-2010/
you can keep a lookout on her blog... as to when she announces the next and just leave a comment sayin you would like to participate..
Im sayin this cos you really write well :)
take care
Rock ON...!!
your writing is truthful and i like it a lot... and the words you have written at the top, abt your grand pa... really nice :)
and thx for coming to my blog... hope to see you more of you there :)...
take care and keep writing......
@ meghhna ...thnx thnx alot ... :) :) ..n yeah m definately participating in the next week's rally....thnx thnx alot for the link thnx fr liking my poems ... :)
@ thousif .....thnx thnx alot fr liking my peoms .. !!
its beautiful :)
thnkii!!!
hey nice one yaar ,keep on writing alots of poems n then publish the book
thnx siddhant
Awesome!
Just that one word!
You should now start righting a book!
thnx lakshya....thnx alot .. ! :)
surely i will start "writing" a book...
Excellent for sure !!!
I agree with the person above,
u shud write a book,
actually U shud have written by now,
Ur collection is also mind blowing !!!!
So do it !!!
Happy blogging !!!
Take care !!
@ ankit bhaiya.....i cannot publish a buk with the collection here..but i'll surely start writing a book .. !
Nice awakening...Heartspell
A masterpiece. truly beautiful and dreamy poem.
happy thursday and namaste,
trisha (mydomainpvt.wordpress.com)
@ Heartspell ..thnx alot .. !
@ island of peace ...thnx alot .. ! n namaste :P .. !
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